 | Six to ten pages of double-spaced analysis, breaking down
issues in
order of priority. Perfect for fine-tuning or major
over-hauls. |
| Ensure your premise is strong, engaging, unique and
marketable. |
| Have you hooked and re-hooked your audience by page
10? 30? 90? |
| Analysis of dialogue. Unique voices? Memorable
lines? Interesting characters? |
| Visual and artistic merit of your material.
Have you created "eye candy" for the audience?
Will this attract a director? |
| Formatting and other technical issues
discussed. |
| Discussion of pacing and momentum. What are the
stakes? |
| Dialogue dimensionality, plausibility, and
brevity. |
| Character motivations, obstacles, conflict,
plausibility, and point of view. |
| A critical look at the suspense, tension, and intrigue
created in your screenplay. |
| Overall assessment. Do you have a compelling
story? Artfully masked exposition? A style that
distinguishes you as a professional, unique, storyteller? A
master of diction? |
